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World Book Day in Year 3!

Amazing Costumes

What an exciting day in Year 3!! Drake and Stark classes have come together to read, sing, and write!!

Some amazing costumes in Drake and Stark Class!!

Descriptive Writing

We have also had the chance to write our own, exciting, dramatic, freestyle story! Each child in both classes has had the chance to add their ideas – along with working with Siobhan Eke!!

Check it out below!

Bang! The flying bus swooped over the town. Its white wings gleaming in the sun. Suddenly, the bus went flying. Bang! Into the massive lake. Unfortunately, the lake was incredibly deep.

Then a silver skinned shark, even bigger than a house, started pushing the bus. Everyone screamed in fear! They were terrified! Opening its huge jaws the shark swallowed the entire bus in one massive gulp! With a huge splutter the shark spat out the watery, rusty metal bus. He had mistaken the bus for a big, juicy steak of meat!

What happens next…. Watch this space…. for the endings written by Drake and Stark in the Year 3 Write off!!

Drake version – Live Edit!!

Bang! The flying bus swooped over the town. It’s white wings gleaming in the sun. Suddenly, the bus went flying. Bang! Into the massive lake. Unfortunately, the lake was incredibly deep.

Then a silver skinned shark, even bigger than a house, started pushing the bus. Everyone screamed in fear! They were terrified! Opening its huge jaws the shark swallowed the entire bus in one massive gulp! With a huge splutter the shark spat out the watery, rusty metal bus. He had mistaken the bus for a big, juicy steak of meat!

Amazingly, the bus shot out of the lake and landed noisily on the road because it had become enchanted. What happens next is a little miracle. Every single person on the bus walked out alive. But… and it’s a massive but… this was just the start of their story!!

The bus kept flying around Norwich for a few weeks but finally disappeared to London and was sometimes seen by small but curious children during the day!

The events of our story follow a man, a man named Gary, who was on the bus that stormy day in Norwich and he has a very interesting story to tell.

6 months later….

Gary was funny lad. He had eyes like street lamps, bright red hair like a overgrown bush and was a tiny bit taller than everyone else. With a mouth like an oven door, Gary could always be heard talking from a long way away. He absolutely adored taking photos and had a wild imagination of his own!

His imagination was mostly about fun things… Often his mind was rather curious and creative. He loved to go to weddings and take photos, these were not your usual wedding photos, but ones that were a little bit stranger. Like pictures of clouds that looked funny shapes and the guests.

On World Book Day, Gary was moving as fast as he could to get to work because, just like normal, he was running late. After spending too long eating his cereal and daydreaming about pictures, he was now sprinting happily along the main road.

Today was the first day of his new job – taking pictures of some very important people. Wondering who the first people on his list today were made him very nervous… So nervous he had forgotten how to take photos using his camera!

What happens next? You decide… Write your ideas in the comments box below!!

 

Stark version – Live Edit!!

Bang! The flying tour bus swooped over the town. It’s white wings gleaming in the sun. Suddenly, the bus went flying. Bang! Into the massive lake. Unfortunately, the lake was incredibly deep.

Then a silver skinned shark, even bigger than a house, started pushing the bus. Everyone screamed in fear! They were terrified! Opening its huge jaws the shark swallowed the entire bus in one massive gulp! With a huge splutter the shark spat out the watery, rusty metal bus. He had mistaken the bus for a big, juicy steak of meat!

The bus shot out of the sharks mouth. The wings were broken because they had been bitten and chewed by the shark’s teeth so it couldn’t fly like it once could. It crashes back on the road. The people on the bus want to carry on with the tour so the set off down the road.

Now you didn’t know this but the wings were made of the feathers of a really rare bird that didn’t live in this country…..

To be continued.  If you have any suggestions for how the story could end let us know….